Review 158

Oh dear

This is a terrible blog

I think this person is trying to be funny but it just comes off annoying.

I dont want to spend 15 minutes deciphering a sentence.

If you get kicks out of this

“I have a wiofe who’s name is SALLY and we’re not talkin right now because she is a big BITCH and own’t let me tal kto my daughters Cornelia and Sally-Ann. ”

then im sure youll love it.

It will be like one of those crack the code puzzles.



At least the colour scheme isnt bad.

Sorry but I just dont like it.

Hal Killian’s BLOG

Review 162

ah, a nice change of pace! you can tell immediatly that this isn’t a typical weblog. I learned this when I read one of the short essays entitled “random thought:my scrotum deserves the best” , this is a now holds barred sight with topics ranging from the trials and tribulations dealing with diabetes, to “titties and beer”. the hilarious way of tackling issues that some would find taboo made me crack up in amusment. It isn’t all fun and games with stories about a mentally challenged high-schooler who is abused by his fellow classmates. What I at present i cannot say anything about the design since it is noted that it will be changed soon. This site is amazing and I recommend it to anyone interested in getting insight on life or just wondering if they should “shave their balls”TheFunked

Review 131

a quandaryis what we are presented with on brooklynkid.com. it’s strange to look at and even stranger to read. I feel that the weblog should be on the front to grab the viewers attention more, the main page is in the way and should be eliminated with the reader just going to the weblog first. this site is too MTVish for me but that’s not to detract from it. It dosn’t seem to be relevent or insightful. the photographs are what I liked best giving an outsider a glimpse of the webloggers life more than the weblog entries do plus it lets people see one persons view of NYC, the photos show a cornicopia of someone’s life in a way that you feel that you know them, unfortunetly the writing is bland and not very invigorating, rather drifting aimlessly. the photos capture what life is like in a raw and uncut state, to bad the weblog dosn’t do the same. still it deserves some credit for being bold in design and in photography and I would recomend it for a lookbrooklynkid.com

Review 160

A refreshing weblog from someone who is actually over the age of 30. It’s nice to see a different perspective among the webloggers of the world, most of whom are under 22.



The page is well laid out with warm colors and distinct boundaries. It seems like it may have been from a template, for one part of it said, “This is where you put interesting tidbits about yourself”. Perhaps a mistake, perhaps done on purpose. The one obvious distraction was the banner ad at the top of the page.



The content of the weblog entries was of a personal nature, relating mostly to the goings-on in Willow’s life. From her child’s science fair, to the mood she starts the day in, the entries are thoughtful and well written.



Not much else is offered that I could find, but what is there is definitely quality.willow

Review 156

The haphazard layout of this site, with varying fonts and little to help you distinguish between weblog entries, discouraged me from the start. I made myself stick around long enough to scroll down until things looked a little more tolerable.



The weblog had some funny entries with amusing links. Very random content and funny stories about Ken’s cat were what kept me amused. Ken is apparently a writer of columns for some publication or another (perhaps several?), and his writing style reflects that. I like reading weblogs that don’t distract me with broken sentences and poor spelling, of which there seem to be a lot. This site is well written and well thought out beneath the surface.



The rest of the site was not as interesting as the weblog, or even as existent in the case of the Links page. Ken posts many of the articles he writes, several of which I read. They made me wish I had his job: travelling to Las Vegas, reporting on conventions, writing clever articles for internet news sites. Ah well.



If you can look past the frenetic layout, there is a lot to be found at Ken Layne’s site. I would suggest that you take a look and tell me I’m wrong.Ken Layne ~ The Continuing Crisis