Review 2757

This is Whitey, a questioning kind of guy. It’s also Bitey, his incredibly teeny wise-ass alter-ego, who pops in to attempt to shame, harry, pester or intice Whitey towards a more conventional form of writing. Thankfully, most of the time, Whitey ignores him and continues to give us a real stream-of-consciounceness free form look into his head and heart. They’re worth a good look.

Sordid Detail is just that: details of life, love, work, observations, hopes dreams and blogging. A non-complicated format, easily read, not a lot of external links or mishmash. A sharp spare wrapper for some tasty real contents, his words. I barely noticed formatting here, so busy reading what he has to say. (Did I mention no distractions from the writing?)

Whitey’s a complex guy who doesn’t seem overly interested in censoring his language or topics, which I found quite refreshing. There’s very little of the agony of self-editing apparent, although I’m left with the sneaky suspicion that he is astutely aware of exactly how he’s presenting himself. He writes with a nearly painful candor about topics ranging from music to mini-golf, barflies and bimbos, Moms and Moose(s) (Meece?). He’s got quite a varied history behind him, and I’m guessing a fascinating future in front of him. At 29, he shows a huge amount of insight into the human condition, and is obviously a thoughtful and articulate observer (and participant) of Life, It’s Ownself. He’s only been blogging for a few months, and I’m hoping that he continues indefinately…. since all of this self-challenging search for the meanings of things makes for an exellent read. A most intelligent and interesting writer with the ability to hold my interest despite a lack of foo-foo add on stuff.

Check out his August stories called True Stories Part 2, (this is the best moose story ever!) Using and Losing Digits, (Ode to a Handy-Mom) and the September stories titled Anatomy of a Fistfight, and Pills For Breakfast. These are just a few examples of a ‘Naked Gunner’ of a writer, less concerned with what you think of him than he is with getting his tales told. He’s articulate. He’s hip. He knows big words, and can spell. He’s someone I’d have a beer with.

I can’t quite give him an overall 5 score without somebody screaming at me “he’s not ‘fancy’ enough”… but as a reviewer who’s much more impressed by words then deeds, I think this is a totally absorbing read. I’d like to hear his music, and I hope he continues to write, for I’ve bookmarked and linked him already. Now for the disclaimer: He does use (correctly and appropriately) some ‘objectional’ language, and occasionally his topics may go beyond a PG rating. That said, he’s a savvy and sardonic writer, and I gave him a 4.25 only for the lack of flash and dazzle. His writings earned a solid 5 from this reviewer.The Sordid Details

Review 2816

The Captain’s Log is a nice little title. With the not so subtle hint that this might be a reference to Star Trek, I knew that it was not so. I knew that the name of the site is Captain Spanky, and this was just, well his log.

When going to the site, I noticed that the url was index2.asp. I wondered what would happen if I just went to the base url and I found a mock magazine cover with an attractive woman and what to expect in this months entries. I am glad the author has read up on how I hate splash pages, and was very happy that the url went straight to the log and not this page (more on this in a bit).

The design of the site is something that needs some serious work. Black overall background, blue to black gradient background for the blog area, white to black gradients for the right column, and white text for the blog. Does that cover it all? Oh no, forgot to mention the attractive schoolteacher image at the top. This image seems out of place if you were to 1. Not look at the title (Captain Spanky) and 2. Not look at the splash page I mentioned earlier. Personally I think the design needs a face-lift to better capture the goal of “Captain Spanky”.

The blog itself is all about The Captain. What is going on with him this weekend, his pool tournament, his girl, his friends, the bars he visits, ect. Most recently his thoughts were on the election here in the states which to me is rather dull as everyone has been talking about it for the last 4 months or so. One thing I liked was the inline comments on each post. While this took a little getting used to as the text for the comments is a goldish color and a smaller font, I enjoyed being able to see such communication.

Overall I thought the blog was well written and has a large number of people willing to share their comments as well. The design needs to be updated. This is not a blog for me as I have too much to worry about in my own life, but if you are interested in someone else’s daily life, then this is the blog for you.The Captain’s Log

Review 2830

How’m I Doing? is a generic Blogger template. Simple and uncluttered. What an unusual name for a blog, I thought when I first entered. Then I read the subtitle:

“People routinely greet one another with, “How are you doing?” But when you have cancer, they really want to know how you are doing. This blog will contain posts that try to answer that question on as regular a basis as I can.”

Turns out the name is quite apropos after all.

This is the blog of Tim Cooper of Alabama, who is going through treatment for lung cancer. He mentions in one of the entries about Writing as Therapy. Something that one of our own reviewers mentioned once. Tim’s hard copy journal spilled over into this blog.

He writes in a clear and poignant way about his illness. He also manages some genteel humor along the way. The posts began in September of this year, and are infrequent, but very well written. One is almost immediately drawn in to our author’s life as he describes his treatments and shares his faith.

The latest entry is from November 14. I will be checking back to see how things are progressing for our hero. For surely anyone who faces this kind of test with such wit and grace is certainly a hero.

I cannot rate this blog in the normal way. It doesn’t seem proper. I’m giving it a 5 for breathtaking honesty.

And here’s a prayer that the author makes a full and speedy recovery.

How’m I doing?

Review 2847

Please don’t take offense, Greg & Deb, but the name of your blog sounded like a site for swingers when I first read it. (You never can tell what impression someone else will have of something, can you?) At any rate, imagine my surprise when the blog turned out to be just a wonderful tale of a family with a hilarious photo of two children (I assume they are Greg & Deb’s) sitting in a basket watching laundry go ’round. A brilliant first impression.

And it doesn’t disappoint from there. Greg and Deb have been blogging for a loooong time (since 2003, making their blog archaic, since blogging seems so ‘new’ to the thousands who discovered it in 2004.) While Deb is included in the title, Greg is the one who posts, but he speaks of his wife and family so much they may as well be blogging with him. The early posts tell of the birth of their second child and contain revealing posts about marriage and children–all of it compelling and tinged with humor. There are no titles to the posts, they are all simply dated, so it is hard to tell you what I enjoyed (especially since I enjoyed nearly every post I have read thus far).

There is not a link to “About Us” or even “About Me,” rather a ‘Goo b Gone’ link in the sidebar. I’m going to guess that this pertains to Greg’s attempts at becoming more fit–even though it doesn’t appear to have been updated since 2003. So, I question the need to keep the ‘Goo b Gone’ link, and I encourage an “About Us” link.

The May 7, 2004 post about testosterone being a blessing and a curse is just one of the many that made me laugh out loud. I hope you take a trip over to this blog and spend some enjoyable time there. I plan on reading as many of the archives as I can (sorry I couldn’t read them all before having to turn in this review. I am sure they are worth every second.)

Greg & Deb on the Web

Review 2867

This blog is designed for a target audience of…wait for it…small business. You didn’t see that coming, did you? (I kid.) It’s not a very well designed blog, but the sheer volume of links to resource material makes it an invaluable tool for anyone who owns or will possibly own a small business.

Denise O’Berry runs the site and has written “three booklets” and “several how-to pamphlets” on small business issues. It took some digging to find her bio, and I only found it after many, many clicks through her linked site which is deniseoberry.com.

Denise seems to be struggling to find an audience for her blog and her otherwise sound advice. My criticism of the site is two-fold: She should put her bio and info prominently on the page. People want to know why they are taking advice from Denise, what her credentials are, how she’s helped others. The second bit is: get rid of the annoying pop up ad for “Small Business Boot Camp” that comes up every time you hit a link to anything else. This will chase people away faster than a small business fails.

But! If you follow the advice Denise gives, perhaps your small business will not fail. Spread the word to your small business friends to check out this blog. I honestly don’t believe you’ll find a more comprehensive site out there on this subject. Just for small business